Rhetorical Devices

Time to continue my sharing from the Jakarta Post's Writing Workshop. The second session is about Rhetorical Devices, very useful for people who want to make their writing stronger. There are many rhetorical devices, such as simile, alliteration, tricolon, etc. If you remember your Bahasa Indonesia classes from high school, you'll remember the lessons about "majas", right? This is kinda similar with that.

For the assignment, the coach asked us to submit an article that has at least 3 different rhetorical devices. Here's mine below. Can you spot the rhetorical devices?

Why I Fight the iPad

Kids who are raised in the digital age do not understand how it feels to be a gaptek (gagap teknologi – or technology illiterate). They seem to be equipped by a sixth sense for technology related stuff: they know exactly the differences between touch screen phones and the ones with keypads, they can adjust easily with new gadgets, and they usually can find the best shortcuts or tricks in our phone- long before we even knew that they existed.

My 4,5 years old son amazed me every time he played with his iPad. Beating my score in Temple Run, sailing easily through the dead end levels in Candy Crush, or showing me the ways how to play Angry Birds correctly. I watched with mixed feelings when his fingers moved across the screen, like a cheetah chasing his prey.

I realized that nowadays iPad has played a huge role in children’s education and brain development. A study conducted at Longfield Academy in Kent, England, showed positive impacts of the iPad when being used as educational tool for students and teachers. The study mentioned that iPads have revolutionized teaching and encouraged collaborative learning.

Meanwhile, some companies like Vivity Labs had launched scientifically designed brain-training games to help develop children’s brain. One of the games, Sparky’s Adventures, has Parent’s Corner that gives parents insight into how their kids’ brains are developing while playing the games.

But besides all the glitters, can iPad really replace the green scenery and the fresh air? Or the pleasure of playing outside with your friends, socializing with real people? I don’t think so.

If you grew up before the 90s, I’m pretty sure you still remember the beauty of playing outdoor with your friends. I remember vividly my excitement every time I walked outside my house and anticipated a long, fun afternoon. Playing tag with the neighbor kids and fishing in the nearest pond and riding bicycle and exploring the neighborhood. The joy that my son, along with so many kids out there, missed a lot these days.

I noticed that my son spent so much time indoor, glued into his iPad screen, and only spent little time outdoor socializing with his friends. Every time I had prepared other activities for him, iPad always allured him to find some excuses to check on it. Even more unbelievable is whenever we have a playdate with other kids, they keep on busy playing (or exchanging) iPads! And this is when I finally declared my war against the iPad.

The first time I tried to separate my son with his iPad, it was so hard. He’s furious: kicking, screaming, wailing. I’ve developed a schedule that limits his time playing with iPad. Homework first, then he can play for 30 minutes. On weekends, I prepared outdoor activities for him, from swimming lessons to museum trips and biking in Car Free Day. Anything that can separate him with his iPad, even only for a while.

Of course it’s not easy. Another day, another battle, another drama. My son still asks for his iPad every time he doesn’t have interesting thing to do, or if he sees other kids playing with their iPads. Moreover, I know that sometimes, when I was busy with works or had to catch up with something else, I was the one who’ve been tempted to pull out the iPad from its hiding place and give it to my son so he wouldn’t disturb me.

But gradually, the effort works. Last week I accompanied him to his swimming lesson and he didn’t want to come out from the pool even though his lesson was already over. And the last time we met with my brother’s kids, the children were playing football instead of being busy with their gadgets. It’s relieving to see kids having fun outside and laughing out loud for a change.

I agree that it’s impossible to eliminate the role of gadgets in this digital era. And like other gadgets, iPad has its own perks and positive traits. But I’m glad to say that although the iPad still becomes a part of our lives, its grip is not as strong as before and my son is less dependent on it.

It is indeed good news but with the school holiday just around the corner, I know the challenge is not over yet. And my fight will continue- maybe for many years to come.         

Sing It Singapore!

Another family holiday, this time was a crowded one. The main objective was to make the kids happy, so the destinations - Singapore and Johor - were chosen just to fulfill that goal. Here are some recollections, recommendations, and reminiscence from the memorable holiday :)

1. Peninsula Hotel

- is where we stayed during the short trip. Not too expensive like the hotels in Orchard Road, but still it's pretty decent for kids and the location is also very good. Not far from City Hall station, there is Watson just next door and 7-11 across the street. Recommended! Ow, and the best thing is there's no Indonesians staying at this hotel so you can talk freely in Bahasa Indonesia without worrying somebody will eavesdrop :D

2. Legoland Malaysia

Look at the background! Those two little devils were having a grand time :D

We chartered a bus from Singapore because our group was quite big (17 people). The traveling time was not so bad, about an hour from Singapore to Johor Baru. But the process of getting off the bus to go through Immigration check points (one in Singapore and one in Malaysia) was pretty exhausting, especially for the kids. Finally we made it to Legoland, and since it was a weekday, the place was not too crowded. We almost successfully riding all the rides :)

It's true, though, that Legoland is more suitable for kids below 10 years old. The rides are quite slow and children friendly. They even have two roller coasters, one is for younger kids (like Alap-alap in Dufan). Yofel was pretty excited. Too bad the 4D theater didn't function well, the scent and moving functions didn't work, although the kids related well with the Chima story (you only understand this if your kids play Lego, trust me).

Another cool ride is the Dino Island, but it's not eligible for kids whose heights are below 120 cm. It's like Niagara-gara in Dufan, but instead of Indians and cowboys, there are dinosaurs made from Lego. Too bad Yofel can't ride it.

One of Yofel's favorite rides is the Junior Driving School. Here, kids pretended to enter the driving school, and learn to ride a car (again, made from Lego, very cute). At the end of the ride, they are allowed to have a driving license (although you'll have to pay R35 for this haha).

Before getting the license. Watch out Pak Polisi!

 At the end of the day, we gave the kids a chance to shop for their favorite Lego. My tip is to prepare extra money to buy Lego in one of the shops, because it's worth it, the price is cheaper up to IDR 200k.

We got back to Singapore by our bus, and again, had to pass through the Immigration checkpoints. This time it's more challenging because the kids were already really tired and cranky. My suggestion, if you have extra money and extra time, it's better to spend one night in the Legoland Hotel, and you can also try the waterpark.

Dino from Lego!

3. Dinosaurs Dawn to Extinction (and Annie Leibovitz Exhibition!)

Which one should I choose? :D

The next day, our group split up and we took Yofel to ArtScience Museum in Marina Bay Sands. The building has very cool design, modern and sleek with spacious rooms for the exhibitions. Dinosaurs Dawn to Extinction was almost over, we were lucky it's still there when we visited the museum. The good news was, there's an exhibition of Annie Leibovitz at the 3rd floor and the combo ticket price was quite cheap, so my sister and I decided we will stop by the Annie Leibovitz exhibition after done with the Dino.

But first thing first: Yofel was soooo excited and happy with the dino exhibition. It showed the most wonderful things: real fossils, edutainment related to dinosaurs, replicas of jungle and even the almost real fighting scenes between the fierce dinos.

Cool replicas!

 The audio, video, even 3D demos were very descriptive and interesting. For kids like Yofel, there were some cool games and activities that suitable for children and toddlers. I wish this kind exhibition will visit Jakarta in the future!

Next, my sister and I went to the 3rd floor to see the Annie Leibovitz photo exhibition. I love the spacious, light gallery where the exhibition was held, and I love how the gallery arranged Annie's photos chronologically. My most favorite is of course the Leonardo DiCaprio's one :D

We're not supposed to take picture here *ssshhhh*

4. The Sound of Music

We were very lucky we could watch Sound of Music the musical in Marina Bay Sands Mastercard Theater. This was actually the first time I took Yofel to a musical so I was pretty nervous. Will he make a scene? Will he be bored?

The theater itself is amazing- it's large with live music performance below the stage. The acoustic quality is marvelous and the stage design is beautiful. The performance is wonderful, too. Although coming from Broadway, the theater gave opportunity to Singaporean to also perform. So from the 7 Von Trapp's kids, there's one Singaporean :)

Yofel unexpectedly loved the performance. He sat in the children special stool provided by the theater and enjoyed the musical scenes, especially the Do Re Mi one :) But he was a bit confused because there were some scenes different from the movie. And Yofel got bored during the conversation scenes, especially that involved only the grown ups. He fell asleep after the intermission, but I'm so proud of him for accompanying me in this amazing musical :)

yaaawnnn XD

the gank...

5. Fullerton Walk

Singapore is crazy about running (like Jakarta) and now there are lots and lots of running track. Too bad I didn't bring my running shoes, but one evening we decided to walk from our hotel to the Fullerton area, passing by the running track (and many runners!) to the Merlion. The atmosphere was so nice, and the view was beautiful.

Next time I visit Singapore, running shoes are in my packing list :)

One Fine Day

Minggu lalu, tanggal 9 Oktober, Yofel ulang tahun ke-4. Bener-bener ya. time really flies! Kebetulan pas ulang tahun itu Yofel lagi libur mid term. Jadi, instead of ngerayain di sekolah, akhirnya gue memutuskan untuk cuti dan bawa Yofel ke... Dufan! :)

Masuk di dunia fantasi, dunia ajaib yang mempesona *nyanyi*

Sejujurnya, yang semangat ke Dufan bukan hanya Yofel, tapi gue juga! Hahaha...kayaknya udah lebih dari 10 tahun gue nggak menyambangi theme park ini... Padahal kemarin-kemarin ini udah sempet ke Universal Studios Singapore, Trans Studio Bandung, malahan ke Six Flags juga pas dulu di Belanda. Tapi Dufan? Malah ditelantarkan ;p

Jadi, hari Rabu itu, gue bertiga Yofel dan Ncus (Rayo nggak bisa ikut karena cutinya udah abis, hiks) menyambangi Dufan. Meski di websitenya ditulis Dufan buka jam 11 siang di weekdays, ternyata pas kita nyampe sana jam 10.30, gerbangnya udah dibuka kok. Tiket per orang (termasuk anak di atas 100 cm) IDR 150k. Not bad lah!

Kesan pertama pas masuk? Sepiiiii :D Inilah enaknya dateng di hari biasa. Nggak perlu ngantri sana-sini, tiketnya pun lebih murah 100 ribu dibanding weekend/hari libur. Memang sih ada beberapa rombongan (antara lain anak-anak SMA dari Bandung, terus ada juga rombongan karyawan Alfamart), tapi overall masih termasuk sepi dan bebas antri.

Saking sepinya, pas naik beberapa wahana, dan Yofel pingin ngulang sekali lagi, kita nggak perlu turun karena nggak ada antrian orang sama sekali :D Terus asiknya lagi, kita bisa minta petugasnya untuk nambah putaran.. Waktu naik Alap-alap (roller coaster mini) sama Yofel, petugasnya nambah putaran sampai 6 kali...Trus waktu gue naik Halilintar, yang biasanya cuman 1 putaran, dikasih 2 putaran dalam sekali naik. Seru bangettt!!!

Dufan sekarang tentu udah beda sama Dufan jaman baheula yang terakhir kali gue datengin. Banyak permainan baru seperti Tornado, Hysteria atau pertunjukan spesial efek Treasure Land yang lumayan keren ternyata. Tapi kangen juga sama beberapa wahana, kayak Balada Kera, yang udah nggak ada dan diganti sama pertunjukan yang lebih canggih. Perbedaan lainnya, sekarang hampir di semua wahana besar, disediakan studio foto tempat kita bisa mencetak foto-foto candid yang diambil otomatis pas kita lagi naik wahana. Tipsnya, jangan terlalu cepat puas dan langsung impulsif kepingin beli fotonya, apalagi kalau dateng di hari biasa yang sepi, karena kita bisa naik 1 wahana berulang-ulang dan memilih foto yang paling keren :) Lumayan soalnya harganya, IDR 35k per foto.

Jadiii, selama di sana, mainan apa yang sudah bisa dinaikin oleh Yofel?

1. Turangga-rangga, komidi putar yang klasik banget, khas Dufan karena merupakan wahana pertama yang kita lihat setelah masuk gerbang Dufan. Sebenernya wahana ini standar banget, dan kalo antriannya panjang gue juga mikir-mikir mau naik ini..Tapi karena sepi, hayuklah kita pemanasan naik kuda. Yang perlu diperhatiin, putarannya ternyata lumayan kencang kalo dibandingin dengan komidi putar di mall-mall, dan kudanya lumayan tinggi, tanpa pengaman. Jadi harus hati-hati kalau bawa anak kecil.

Pemanasan dulu!

2. Bianglala, ferris wheel raksasa yang seru karena bisa dipakai sebagai ajang lihat-lihat wahana lain dari atas, sambil merencanakan mau naik apa saja setelah ini. Kekurangan Dufan adalah signage yang masih kurang, peta yang sebenernya ada tapi nggak dibagikan kecuali dia minta, sehingga agak susah mengira-ngira rute dan arah menuju wahana yang mau kita naiki. Bianglala lumayan bisa menjangkau pemandangan Dufan yang luas.

3. Alap-alap, roller coaster mini untuk anak-anak dengan tinggi di atas 100 cm. Nggak nyangka, ternyata ini menjadi wahana favorit Yofel! Kita naik Alap-alap sampai 3 kali, dan yang terakhir sampai 6 putaran, dan Yofel masih mau lagi. Heuheuheuuuu he really has my genes!

Yofel's favorite ride :)

4. Gajah Bledug, satu lagi yang cocok buat anak-anak. Sebenernya mainan model begini udah banyak banget di playground mall, tapi main di tempat terbuka kayak gini masih tetep seru. Yofel naik sampe 2 kali :)

5. Poci-poci, semacam naik cangkir yang diputer-puter. Seru juga meski agak memusingkan. Kita naik 2 kali karena sepi banget nggak ada yang ngantri ;p Yang perlu diperhatiin, nggak ada pintu di wahana ini, bentuknya kayak cangkir tapi ada sisi yang terbuka, jadi anak-anak harus dipegang erat-erat, apalagi ternyata puterannya lumayan kenceng!

6. Burung tempur, sejenis Gajah Bledug tapi dengan wahana berbentuk burung tempur, bisa disetir ke kiri/kanan jadi kesannya lebih seru. Lagi-lagi kita naik 2 kali :)

7. Ubanga-banga, bom-bom car untuk anak-anak. Lagi-lagi, kalau antrian panjang, mendingan nggak usah naik ini karena sudah banyak di mall. Tapi karena waktu itu sepi, akhirnya Yofel naik juga sekali.

8. Rajawali Condor, mainan yang intinya kita naik ke wahana pesawat berbentuk rajawali dan diputer-puter sampai atas. Gue agak ngeri Yofel pusing tapi ternyata dia enjoy. Satu pesawat sebenarnya untuk 1 orang, tapi kalau untuk anak kecil lebih baik berdua dengan orang dewasa, takutnya pas lagi di atas dia berdiri karena memang nggak ada seatbeltnya.

9. Pontang-pontang, entah kenapa dulu gue taunya Pontang-panting :) Mainan seperti kursi yang dilempar ke sana-sini dengan kecepatan tinggi. Satu kursi bisa buat berdua, tapi hati-hati karena pengamannya nggak menutup rapat, jadi kalau anak kecil bisa merosot ke bawahnya.

Agak tegang di Pontang Pontang

10. Treasure Land, pertunjukan special effect yang masih termasuk baru. Di hari biasa, ada dua kali pertunjukan, jam 1500 dan 1700. Ceritanya seru, dengan spesial effect api, air dan cahaya yang keren juga. Pas buat anak-anak. Setelah selesai pertunjukan, bisa foto bareng dengan pemainnya :) Lama pertunjukan sekitar 45 menit.

11. Rumah Jahil: alias rumah kaca, Yofel seneng banget di sini karena baru pertama kalinya dia masuk ke wahana model begini. Waktu masuk kedua kalinya, Yofel coba cari jalan sendiri dan berhasil :)

Nyasar di Rumah Jahil

12. Rumah miring, ini wahana super old school karena dulu favorit gue pas masih kecil! Ajaibnya, interior rumah miring ini belum berubah. Yofel seneng banget disini dan emang buat anak kecil wahana ini termasuk seru :)

13. Bumper boat, semacam boat yang bisa ditabrak-tabrakin ala bom-bom car. Mainan ini kayaknya juga agak baru karena jaman dulu seinget gue nggak ada. Untuk naik ini, kita perlu bayar tambahan IDR 25k untuk satu boat.

Driving Bumper Boat

14. Perang Bintang, ini satu-satunya wahana yang pas masuk ke dalamnya Yofel sempet takut, karena lorong tempat ngantrinya gelap dan misterius. Apalagi pas kita di sana nggak ada orang! Tapi setelah naik ke keretanya, Yofel seneng kok. Mainannya kayak tembak-tembakan laser interaktif gitu, jadi kita dikasih target sambil jalan keretanya, terus berusaha nembak target-target itu. Tiap orang dapet satu tembakan.

15. Istana Boneka, of course ini wajib hukumnya. Meski sebenernya basi banget, keretanya pelan, dan boneka-bonekanya itu-itu aja dari jaman dulu, tapi wahana ini lumayan banget buat ngadem karena ber AC. Plus, Yofel bisa dikenalin sama berbagai tempat di dunia.

He's having fun :) at Istana Boneka

Selain itu, gue sendiri sempet naik Halilintar, Kora-Kora, dan Tornado (first experience nih), yang semuanya seru!!

Tapi ada juga kerugian dateng di hari biasa. Saking sepinya, kita nggak bisa naik wahana Piring Ombang Ambing (Yofel penasaran berat), karena minimal harus dinaiki oleh 8 orang untuk alasan keseimbangan. Dan setelah nunggu-nunggu hampir setengah jam, baru kekumpul 4 orang. Gagal deh :(

Menunggu Ombang-Ambing

Kerugian lain, kadang Dufan melakukan maintenance permainan dan wahananya yang paling populer di hari biasa, untuk mencegah kerusakan di saat hari libur. Waktu kita ke sana, wahana Hysteria lagi diperbaiki dan ditutup sepanjang hari. Sayang banget padahal gue penasaran pingin naik :)

Anyway, we had lots and lots of fun that day, and we hope we could be back again soon!

Happy birthday Yofel :)

Coming Soon - Ice Age :)